by Kaylalala Mar 20, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
If you are going to read this PLEASE comment and let me know what you think... |
by Kayla
I like it....spots were rough but overall i like it....the first stanza and the second to last stanza definetly stuck out to me....those were very well written but yea...you are welcome for your comment...i hope they are of use...and thanks for my comments...they mean a lot....oh and im from hart...it is an hour from grandrapids so yea...thanks again for the comments...much love hun |