Wow this is a great poem well expressed and w/ a good flow well done xx ALLY xx

A sad poem of lack of self esteem

Lots of emotions in there - I like the way it just seems to play out like thoughts in someones head

Great =]

Good job.
First stanza: Looking AT the mirror instead of IN straight away suggested to me that the subject didn't like his or her own appearance.
Second stanza: Good, but how about making that last line into two?
Third stanza: You could have maybe described this with more creativity and suspense, but it's ok how it is.
Fourth stanza: I liked the contradiction of trying to look graceful and feeling a disgrace, worked well for me.
Fifth stanza: Liked the rhyme, and the idea of being uncomfortable in your skin.
Sixth stanza: I liked this stanza, good descriptions and powerful words.
Seventh stanza: Realisation of being terrified of what you always considered a dream, put simply and effectively.
Eighth stanza: The pain, the embarrassment, and the loneliness is well portrayed in this stanza, and it is a good way to end.
An additional suggestion is that maybe you could capitalise every "I" to make it grammatically correct and just neaten it up a tad.
Well done, keep writing.

Good poem, modeling is a hrad jod you always have pressure to look perfect and no one ever does!! good job tho!!
~~Sweetie

Nice job, clear message. You can still work on your flow a bit. Keep it up

Its was really good! i love the way you arraged it too!

I totally understand this poem! you're a great writer! I love your work! keep it up, can you plz comment on mine :) xo