Cold trigger

by Crystal   Mar 20, 2006


Its cold in here
All by myself
I know youre here
Thats how it feels

You try to listen
But you dont care
Start walking away
You did your share

Just leave me alone
Dont try to be nice
Im fine by myself
I hope you get lice

Im going away
Not coming back
I dont really want to
So shut up smack

Theres hate and fear inside me
Pulling the trigger is easy
Its what Im going to do
So wait

Just one more second
And ill be free
Just one more second
And no more me

Getting ready to do it
Not letting go
I dont want to hear you
Dont try to say no

You made me do this
You never noticed me
Youve made me do this
So
BOOM!
Im gone
Theres no more me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kurt

    You don't have to force poems to rhyme. Some of the lines are confusing and don't make sense and others are brilliantly written.

    "Just one more second
    And ill be free
    Just one more second
    And no more me"

    I liked that stanza's rhythm and flow. It sounded good. Just keep playing with words and sounds and this will be a good poem.

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