Oh, I simply cannot resist......

reveal real
mistake awake..
soul control
body embody..
freely me
melancholy be..
basis hallucinosis
entity identity...

....and jazz is born again....

Wonderful Lisa, you did an excellent job, very nicely done, way to get creative, bravo!!!

Hmm. I like the form you did for this poem. I never even noticed that until you I finished reading it and you pointed it out.

Great job!

I don't really know what to say other than great job.