Comments : Unnoticable Suicide

  • 18 years ago

    by cassie

    Aww hun i know exactly how you feel, this poem has so much emotion in it, please comment on some of mine, it will be greatly appreciated
    love cass xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by >> Beautifully Mistaken

    Woah... im speechless.
    i loved it. it had a really good flow to it. keep up the awesome work, and dont let this talent go to waste.

    >> Beautifully Mistaken

  • 18 years ago

    by lOVER

    I really like your last stanza...

    "Really I'm taking the only way out I can see
    Drugs have lost their touch
    And soon you'll never see me
    Because I hate myself just that much"

    nice job xx