Fight

by Ryan   Mar 20, 2006


I try to take the pain away.
i try but yet i fail.
i try to make the bleeding stop.
to make your world less frail.
i try to make it through to you.
i try but yet i fail..

i try to take the dreams and thoughts
i try to break them all.
i try to make it all so great
i try but all is gone.

i try to make the feeling strong
i try it all day long
i try to make them feel less pain
i try yet all is gone.

If i don't succeed this way
or make it through the night
i hope that all is well and gone
i hope you stay and fight.

Please leave comments. i would like to hear some feedback.

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  • 17 years ago

    by SweetElectric

    That was fantastic..sad..but emotive...very deep and intense...

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachellea Kachur

    It was very well written

    Your style is one of realism and being able to relate.

    Keep it up.

    5/5

    Rachellea