by pat Mar 20, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Life is very sudden, it can happen in a flash |
by Sango
Pat, i didn't really feel the flow (or vibe) to this poem, sorry, but as i tell others.. I try be as honest as possible, & the truth is, you need a little work, but don't get me wrong, i got the message & yes, you are right about that. |
by Jess
Hey! Excellent poem, Pat. Wonderful use of words! |
by *Jess*
Great poem:P youve got a really good point there and you brought it out really good. keep up the good work |