Great poem:P youve got a really good point there and you brought it out really good. keep up the good work

Hey! Excellent poem, Pat. Wonderful use of words!
(Wish i could write like that!)
Keep up the brilliant work!!

Pat, i didn't really feel the flow (or vibe) to this poem, sorry, but as i tell others.. I try be as honest as possible, & the truth is, you need a little work, but don't get me wrong, i got the message & yes, you are right about that.