Nicely written. flows well and the ending is very nicely done.

good luck and peace
shobhana

I have always liked ur poems, simply because ur thoughts are layed out, i have so many there hard to sort out, but then everynow and then everything fits in a ryme... my writer block is done , finaly i was starting to think it was gone, but if u ever need a friend im an email away, or even just a dial away, (faithfulserenity@hotmail.com) or u can just send a messege from here.. :D