by azlan26
I love the use of 'I could' and the idea of walking straight |
by PURE HEART
Nice use of words and full of love,,, |
by N J Thornton
Impressive write. Now the pressure is on me to give a real review to help make this perfect for publishing. Great idea with the walking straight, the repetition of this kept that idea going through my mind throughout the poem, which was effective. Some good choice of words, and you used original ways of putting the issues across. |
by Sole
Impressed! Well - not really, because I've come to expect nothing less of you . . but anyway! That's such a lovely poem (Beginning to repeat myself now!) All the things you could have done - and yet you just 'kept walking straight' :) I love reading your poems so much! |
by Marjan
Wow kaylee, I really liked the way you wrote it. And |
by Tara Kay
Yeah, i love the use of "I could" throughout the poem, its cool. keep it up |
Oh the gift of foresight....this was another brilliant poem. Keep writing... |