by Melissa Mar 20, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Spring reveals herself |
Wow breathtaking poem done with such perfection had to read twice loved it so muich. Your imagery was so perfect to paint a breathtaking picture absolutely excellent!!!!! |
by Fallen Angel
Superb write, such an unusual idea! I love the progression through time and the way that the poem seems to shift direction as it moves through. And such a brilliant ending. Loved it 5/5 |
by Heather
I think that is one of the best poems i have ever read regarding nature it is so pretty keep up the good work you are really talented GOOD LUCK ON FUTURE POEMS!!!!!!!! |
Melisa you have done an awesome job here. Deep thooooughts expressed . |
by Simon Hayes
Beautiful words... Great writing! |