Beautiful. Fantabulous....amazing! I love this poem and all it says. Great job!

Awesome girl!!!!!!! Absotively, posilutely awesome!!

This is quite enchanting. I like how you went back and forth between nature and emotions. Made for a beautiful piece.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Beautiful words... Great writing!

Melisa you have done an awesome job here. Deep thooooughts expressed .
keep up the good work!

I think that is one of the best poems i have ever read regarding nature it is so pretty keep up the good work you are really talented GOOD LUCK ON FUTURE POEMS!!!!!!!!

Superb write, such an unusual idea! I love the progression through time and the way that the poem seems to shift direction as it moves through. And such a brilliant ending. Loved it 5/5

Wow breathtaking poem done with such perfection had to read twice loved it so muich. Your imagery was so perfect to paint a breathtaking picture absolutely excellent!!!!!
Cathy