Fantastic poem, great job , thanks 4 ur comment meant alot, and if any1 is talented its u keep writing and take care hun sarahx

"She wants a place
Where everything is fine
And so she falls asleep
For the very last time..."

Okk, I am officially in love with this stanza! It is so good! The rhyming is perfect and it is soo powerful! I love the poem!
xoxo