I'm Missing You

by Eduardo Serrano   Mar 20, 2006


I'm missing you,
like a rose without a garden,
like the stars without the moon,
or the waves without the ocean.

I'm missing you,
like heaven without its angels,
like a wedding without a groom,
or an angel without its halo.

I'm missing you,
like the rain without the clouds,
like me without my boo,
or day that never comes down.

You're all I need,
because I'm missing you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    I love this poem it sweet in to the point.XJ

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Fantastic love poem! I really enjoyed reading this.

    So lovely written. Such a sweet poem.

    Some critic? I hope you don't mind? I'm sorry ghehe Well.. In the second stanza the 4th phrase "or angels without its halo" .. Hmm that phrase kind of takes away the flow of tha stanza. Maybe because you already mentioned angels in "a heaven without angels"

    That's all I can say =) It's fantastic!
    Keep up the good work =)

    Lotsaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

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