Fantastic love poem! I really enjoyed reading this.

So lovely written. Such a sweet poem.

Some critic? I hope you don't mind? I'm sorry ghehe Well.. In the second stanza the 4th phrase "or angels without its halo" .. Hmm that phrase kind of takes away the flow of tha stanza. Maybe because you already mentioned angels in "a heaven without angels"

That's all I can say =) It's fantastic!
Keep up the good work =)

Lotsaaaaaa love
-xxx-

I love this poem it sweet in to the point.XJ