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by emorco08 Mar 20, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / grieving, loss
Shes faced with a hard problem Be loved or be pure Cant put up with it anymore Her boyfriend comes to her house Finds her drunk in her room and makes his move Then leaves like nothing happened Theres no longer a happy child in her Just a used girl with no meaning to live
by HOLLY ARMER
Tragically heartbreaking Just a suggestion, it's not necessary to say "She". That's implied within poetry and it takes away from the piece. Take care and keep it up~Holly *Oh and there's a new challenge with CC&P. Check out the EOP forum :)