Without You

by Eduardo Serrano   Mar 20, 2006


Without you,
my life would seem meaningless.
Without you,
my love would seem lifeless.
Without you,
I'm just another wondering poet.
But with you,
I have a love that I'll never regret.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    I think this poem is short but very sweet..........XJ

  • 18 years ago

    by Mickayla

    Nicely Written! Reminds me of my boyfriend...He lives twenty hours away from me. Yet, he's ready to leave home to live with me.

    Great! Poems are meant to do exactly what you did! Remind us of something (by us i mean your readers) or paint us a picture! And thats what yours did for me! Ive read alot of the poems on love so far and yours was straight to the point and true to your heart!
    Thank you for that piece! I enjoyed it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Nice poem. Though I liked the first two better actually =P But oh well that's just my opinion.

    Nice written. It's a very sweet poem.

    Well done!

    Lotsaaaaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

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