U have a good poem you sould do more

This is a very good poem. great job

Very good peice, the content is very clearly expressed and written

5/5

I like the way you didn't overcrowd your true thoughts with a load of similies and metaphors i think it lets your emotions and feelings out a bit better

I loved this poem its realy good it shows alot of ur feelings and emotions
the best thing about this poem is that u showed pasion
and i actualy feelt how u feel
xoxoroxyxoox

Babe that was soo sad... Im crying... I could feel tha emotion and power flying from tha screen into my mind... beautiful... xoxo ttys