What a beautiful poem. I won't comment critically as it is clearly a personal write. I'm sure your sister adores this because I thought it was so heart felt and only something a sister could write. Well done.

I love the description of the person, and the love of dancing
Your poems rule :)

You must love your sister very much :) Your poems always include so much beautiful imagery within them - I'd love to be able to write like you :)

Peace. [Sole]

I can tell that you showed your love to your sister very well in this poem...which shows that you really care about her as well....very nice poem..loved it :)
~*Linz*~

Your love for your sister is overwhelming and i love reading poems with so much love in them. keep it up
xxx