by Sole
That is such a beautiful poem :) The image it paints of the terrible mess youngstres always leave behind! But where would the fun be without these 'Peanut Butter Mornings' :) |
by LadyPearl
Very creative and descriptive. Though the meaning and topic of friendship seems hard to find. Keep it up |
by azlan26
Aww - the fondness shown in this poem was touching |
Such a sweet poem. It has such a parental feel to it even though they're your sisters. Great work! |
by Daze
This was a sweet poem, i really loved it when you say their fingerprints have grown and they are geting older, i have a younger sister, and it's so strange to see her grow up, because she's going through the things I went through. The whole story line of your poem was really good, and I can see the effort you put into it, but to tell you the truth, the flow wasn't that great, you could work on that with this poem. but either way, i'm giving you a 5/5 because it was a unoque poem. |
by Fallen~Tears
Great cute poem 5/5 |
by Tara Kay
I loved it, its fun and nice and sweet and loving and awesome to read. xxx |