Good to see another songwriter/poet submitting materials here. I'll get back to ya with some feedback.. just want to take a bit of time to savor your lyrics, they're very emotionally powerful. Check out my stuff when ya get a chance, thanks : )

I'm actually lost for words. No criticisms at all, flawless (except you might want to correct the spelling in the first chorus - just though you might like to know) Really though, absolutely amazing, I'm stunned, genuinely stunned if I could give it 6 I would, as it stands 5 will have to do! x