by Mickayla Mar 20, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I am a person, |
by *Jess*
Great job! 5/5 really good originality and rhythm. youve got alot of tallent comments and votes are greatly appreciated.. i always return the fav. |
Good job. The third verse is kind of odd. Personally I don't think it goes, but hey, it is your poem, and over all, you have great penmanship. Keep it up! |