Good poem, you have alot of talent. keep writing xxx |
by Poetvoices
I loved it! 5/5! IT DOESN'T SUCK! I hate it when you lie to me about a new poem. :D lol! I love this stanza: |
Great poem! u did an amazing job wit the rhyming...5/5 keep it up |
by Vanessa Lea
Great work. The rhyming is really good and I find the subject so easy to relate to. I think that is a bad thing eh? |
by Cody
I love this poem it asks a question that I don't have an answer to but understand well pain and depression are all I have left i hope its not the same for you |