Wow - that is so . . sad? I'm not really sure how I feel. I love it when poems bring about the emotional side of me!! 5/5 :)

Peace. [Sole]

A sad poem - it seemed like it conveyed lost hope
The last stanza especially the last two lines=brilliant
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It's so weird....somehow I know exactly what you mean....I'm amazed....sounds like your first love?

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Awesome Poem. I loved it. very well written peice of poetry.

~Joe~

Wow, this poem really touched me. There's so much emotion and you make it easy for others to understand what you were thinking when you wrote it.

"He taught me to never lose myself in the world.
And he knew the words to say when I was afraid.
He had everything needed to make me fall in love.
I wonder if he even knows just how close I was."

I can really relate to this...keep up the awesome work and never stop writing!

~Kelly~

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Beautiful poem...very inspiring.
I luv the idea you had for this write.
A fairytale to remember it was lovely.

I really felt this poem it was beautiful yet sad at the same time. bravo x

I love it great job full of meaning i totally understand it i love it

Ive never read a love poem from you. And I must say, This was great! It really was. They way the used also used Cinderella was good too. Loved it! Keep it up 5/5

luv natalie x-x

So sad and emotional, but perfect. Its worded beautifully, well done
xxxx