Thats a really nice poem xxx

I really like this poem I like the fact that you explored something different than alot of poets and that you pretty much told a story

I loved it, keep it up

A differnt spin on vampires. i love it. that lucky girl lol. thanks for your coments. i love vampires too. iv written 3 poems about them. exellent work. thanks for your comment!!!

Ruby

I liked this one 2 :)

Very romantic. i really like this 5/5

I like this poem it kinda reminds me of the poem i wrote called "a vampires love'..(its under my other screen name...♥DarkCinderella06(Joc)♥)...your welcome for the advise..im here ne time to help...Jocey

Dark love poetry...is awesome!!! its the type I love to write, as well as just flat out dark. keep up the good work. 5/5 very well done

This is really sweet, the connotations if the vampire contrasted to the gentle emotions is inspired
xx

Aww.. a little 'odd' poem but a nice one :) I liked it hehe.. I'm not the biggest fan of Vampires but I haven't come accross one that has fallen in love..

Great job

The vampire scheme was awesome...and portraying them as lovable and caring was a twist.....nice job i loved it!....thx for ur comment...
love ya lots,
sore

This is really sweet, i like the fact that you say 'i know' and he doesnt even need to say anything, it shows a true connection, kind of like when people finish eachothers sentences, i always think its really cute :)
xX velvet kisses Xx

First I will start off with a compliment; I am envious of how well you told a story through the poem that is really cool and something I really need to work on. Now for a little bit of constructive criticism, I felt that the rhyme scheme was very bland and didn't excite me to much. It was like aabbccddeeff perhaps try something like ababcdcdeeff which might help the rhythm/pace as well well I hope that helped (if it even made sense)
much love
Aaron (remo) xxx

AWESOME poem!! I think it's adorably sweet, lol ;P
(p.s. thanx for the comment :))

Golden eyes huh?
reminds me of twilight *wink*

Bit creepy sis...but good none the less. You and your vampires haha...what no one really knows is that you are actually a ghost...but thats to their own peril

-Jason-

Hey great poem, really liked it! 5/5