Wow! I saw your comment on my poem and decided to read for poems (thanks very much by the way!! :) ) Just wanted to say that your poem is amazing. You are awesome at writing and always keep writing. Believe in yourself, because you have a way with words.
-Alex :)

(P.S. --> I read your poem to one of my best friends. She started crying. Just wanted you to know that It was so moving and powerful.)

That was really well done! I hope it doesnt come true though =[
5/5, It was really good!

luv natalie x-x

Whoa.....
Mind blowing....very different but funnily enough I liked it.
Has a kind of narrative feel to it....but keep writing...please do....

Come help me with me poems....I'm new too!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

It Was Really Good Hun, You Showed Alot Of Emotion Through This Poem, Reminds Me Of How I Use To Write...But Of Course Your Better 5/5 All The Way...I Would Suggest You Put This Poem Under Another Category Though xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Very well written with some powerfully expressed feelings.very effectivly portrayed

5/5

It's an okay poem. Not one of the best, no offense. Maybe if you made your lines a little shoter...

That's really good. It moved me, I have a friend that was in the hospital because of cutting, and luckly she didn't die. Again, great job.

Wow! that was really good. for 13 you are an awesome writer. besides, it doesnt matter how old you are. you should check out my stuff. its not that great so maybe you could help me out.