I was

by Sakura   Mar 20, 2006


I was the one who
loved you
I was the one who
cared
I was the one
dying
I was the one
scared
I was the one that
listened
I was the one that
cried
I was the one saying
"Don't worry, Ill be there"

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Repetitive poems are quite often excedingly boring but this is brilliant. it has a veru strong flow and the repitition, far from hindering the peice, really adds to the overall effect

    5/5

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