My desire: my girl

by Luis Gustavo   Mar 20, 2006


What i desire
is what i need
i want a girl
i can hang out with all week
who do i choose
who do i pick
The clock is ticking
my time away
i love to care
i care to love
i girl i can call
my sweet little dove
i'll meet her soon
i'll make her mine
i'll treat her her right
my treasure not my prize

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  • 16 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Aww luis i really liked this poem a lot it was really sweet and romantic. =) hey if u ever want to talk ill b here jsut send me a message

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    So sweet...
    =)

    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by Luis Sousa

    Liked also...
    but your name...
    are your parents portuguese?

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Awww this is sweet...i lyked it....
    love dia

  • 18 years ago

    by ..*V*..sxi auzzie..*V*..

    Hey i love it its sweet and it sounds like it came from the heart which is really cute lol keep writing them and never give up

    love skye

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