Why do I Miss you?

by Kaylalala   Mar 21, 2006


If you are going to read this PLEASE comment and tell me what you think...

Holding on
To what we had
Forever and for always
Then things won't feel so bad

I'll remember
The day we shared
When we had that moment
When you showed you cared

You moved real fast
I didn't know what to do
I thought I was in love
Turns out that wasn't true

I don't want you
But for some reason I miss you
The way you would make me feel
Like you knew

What I was thinking
You were what I yearned for
At the time
But not anymore

I'm Over You
Get a clue...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Arnold

    Aww so so so awsome!! great poem!!! 5/5

    Baby Ashmo

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Hey hun...great poem...the only thing I would suggest is fixing the flow because it seems to be a bit off...but other then that very nice job. Oh and thanks for the comment on my poem it means a lot to me...much love

    -kayla-

    p.s.-what part of michigan are you from?

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Good job..I like it! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Great poem kayla! i know how you feel. that feeling really sucks, doesn't it? well, i hop things get better for you! Keep up the good work! and thanks for commenting on my poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice job expressing your self keep it up 5.5

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