Omg. you're so young. and he left you just like that.that's just wrong. well great poem. keep writing. good luck to u and your kid

Whoa, thats all i can say. this poem has left me so speechless, that guy is a swine, hun i know u probably still love him, but i hope he chokes and die. No girl deserves to be treated like a piece of meat. - love this poem, well done!

Hey i was thinkin...then i wrote this thing, coz well u inspired me. check it out, its called MY INNOCENCE. enjoy

Hey I love your poem because it's so true I'm going through the exact same thing so yae i feel it to except i have a baby girl but yea your poem is really good and i'm srry u had to go through such a hard and forgetting time

Great poem! 5/5+

Tears in my eyes Because I cry :(
THis was A real goodstory,Series slash poem:) 5.5

Good work!!