Hidden Love

by Danielle   Mar 21, 2006


Hidden love,
one thats only for you to see.
Wishing and hoping,
that the other would notice.
Never found,
only waiting in the shadows.

Some times you,
go on and on hinting on.
Only to see,
that the wrong people have noticed.

If it only,
was seen by the one.
The hidden love,
between the two...

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  • 18 years ago

    by shelle

    Great poem!!! look at mine plz

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Compton

    Good start. You have the right idea, however you need to make your poems more captivating. Use a thesaurus and look up big words that you could use! haha, just kidding, but sometimes that does help. Also, you would be surprised how often adding rhyme to your poems increases their quality and meaningfulness. Is that a word? oh well..... Keep writing! (:

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