by Brittney Follett Mar 21, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I can hear you, |
by NightKeeper
This is awesome. I've put some of your poems on my fav list and I'm adding you to my fav authors. Aside from some grammer mistakes its very well written. For some reason, to me, some parts don't flow that well... But I like the feeling it gave me when I was reading it. |
by Goth
This was a really good poem but ... in the beginning you talk about clouds & in the second stanza hell... kinda contradicting ... but still a very good poem ... well writtin! |
by Leanne
This has by far got to be one of the best poems i've read on this site, totally kept my attention from start to finish. great poem a definate 5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
Wow, wow wow! |
by Robie Lincer
You reall know how to write dark poems... The imagination was very good... I loved the ending as well... it was amazing... |