Wow...is all i can say. its a great poem and hope tp see more from you! thnx 4 the comment on mine:)
Take care
xxx

WOW!!!!!!!
beautiful penned!!!!!
I swear this is more than amazing!!!!
I love the parts when you start to sing, every stanza was very captivating, inspiring title aswell!!!
I just do not know what to say, lol! amazing work, I love dark poems too, hehe XD
I hope you're okay sweetie =)
Keep up that wonderful work of yours
Lov U
NemO x0x0x0x0x

thanks hun for your sweet comment xXx

Awesome. drew me in instantly with a hook to keep me interested.

Again, one of my favorite ways of writing poems, short and straightforward but with a lot of meaning. I LOVE the title, it seems almost ironic. Usually when people think of songs in poetry they think 'happy love songs' but you've put an excellent twist on that. Very nice, 5/5.

You reall know how to write dark poems... The imagination was very good... I loved the ending as well... it was amazing...

keep writting always...

Wow, wow wow!
I loved this!
I thought the stanza
'' wish you could fix me
But now you're dead
now I'm all alone
Just stay out of my head''

would flow better with
But now you are dead
now I am all alone.
Just stay out of my head.

''I doing what you want
I walk through Hell's gate''

Should be 'I'm doing what you want''

Apart from that, I think this was absolutely perfect.

My favourite stanza was

''Its a song of death
my solo to hell
It's called "I Love You"
Does that ring a bell?''

I thought that was really powerful and hard hitting.

The imagery and wording were a pleasure to read.
This has to be one of my favourites.

This has by far got to be one of the best poems i've read on this site, totally kept my attention from start to finish. great poem a definate 5/5

This was a really good poem but ... in the beginning you talk about clouds & in the second stanza hell... kinda contradicting ... but still a very good poem ... well writtin!

This is awesome. I've put some of your poems on my fav list and I'm adding you to my fav authors. Aside from some grammer mistakes its very well written. For some reason, to me, some parts don't flow that well... But I like the feeling it gave me when I was reading it.