Wonderful poem. I love how you use words and rhymes to create a divine expression of creativity and feeling. Keep it up!

Beautiful penned, strong message yet very inspiration! "Love is a wind through invisible trees, Arising from old, unresolved melodies."

Oh Bill, this is so beautiful and inspiring! What a sweet and wonderful message. I absoultely adore the third stanza, awesome poem!

Bill ,
So many words of truth set forth in this piece .
I think the lines that touched me the most is :Living life and treating others with respect
Giving what we want in return

So much said in these 2 lines .And really words that would make a much better world if people could just stop and see the wisdom and truth in these 2 lines.

The content within this poem is just full of messages that people should live by to make a happy , safer , more compassionate world ...the way it was meant to be .

Touching write Bill , very touching

P.S Huhhh *sighs* Today I will finally get a chance to catch up on some reading . The only problem being that alot of the members CC&P are not on my favs cause I just go into poems in our group to read them .So I will have to do a search for them .(But of course you are on my favs so I don't have to look for you.....lol

OMG I miss you guys sooooooo much it hurts ......*sniffs*
Take care , my friend .....

Beautifully written... Deep, powerful and meaningful!

The poem in general has a really uplifting tone and is quite encouraging. However, that last line really puts a downer on the mood and left me feeling sad. It was a good poem, but the ending could have been better.

YaY I loved the last line!!!
amazingly written and well expressed
keep it up
Lov
NemO x0x0x0x0x

Wow, Mr. Turner, to tell the truth I had always heard about you
And I knew you were a great poet. But today, for the first time,
I decided to read one of your poems so, I went to choose one
Of them but then, the titles were so good that I couldn’t help it.
So, now, I have a file in my computer titled “Bill Turner” which
I’ve saved your poems there so whenever I feel like reading a
good poem I have sth to read.
Are you a mind reader or sth?????? cuz you just expressed my
Thoughts.
Lots of love,
Marjan

It was a wonderful poem full of expression. Nice Job.

Very strong write my friend....very inspirational....awesome.

love Ann

Two thumbs up! I continue to express tol my friends that life is a journey of decisions and the person who can not make them has a hard trip ahead.... Gotta change the way we see things and the way we think... Great poem....

Great write....u said so true.....heard a lot abt u sir!
but ur poems are amazing.......

Bharti

I loveee it .. my poems are always so dark .. even if i don't plan them to be it seems to be the only insiration i have

Thats true I'm always trying to get my ex another chance but I don't know maybe i should move on I don't but please read my poems and tell me if you think I should or not

You're good at writing. everytime i get sad nowadays, i think of your poems. if you have a moment, check one of mine please. but, i give you major kudos points for your poems. keep writing for all of us sapss... lol. lata.

I loved this one! You talent always seems to amaze me!

xox Tiffany

I havent said much in my other comments..but im already running out of words your poems have left me speachless and i feel like saying there amazing, incredible, great and all that jazz just isnt good enough... 5/5 take care :)

I love this one, i think you have an awesome way with words. i like the last two lines the most. keep writin and ill keep readin! comment back?...

What a beautiful and true message- if everyone treated others how they would like to be treated all the problems in this world would dissapear, it is wonderfully structured and spiritually uplighting- a joy to read. :) Take care XxX

Very nice and beautiful