I Need You!!!

by RadianceInReverse   Mar 21, 2006


Here I am sitting alone again
thinking of you and your sweet embrace
crying because I miss your smiling face

All I want is to be near you
to hear your sweet words
to feel your warm touch
I love you sooo Much!!!

You make my life so much brighter
you make my day so much kinder
with you around I have a reason to smile
And everything seems so much lighter

I miss you even after a minute or two
Without you I'm missing an important piece of my life

Because your all I need to survive!!

This Poem isn't quite finished...but id love your opinions on it.....Joc

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  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    I love this part
    "Here I am sitting alone again
    thinking of you and your sweet embrace
    crying because I miss your smiling face"
    nice job keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats a very good poem, if thats just the begining woow, hope to read the other half soon :)