by dustinl90 Mar 21, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
As the rain falls,i sit in total darkness.Drowning in pain.Your gone,its not the same anymore.As my heart cracks i fall to the wet ground.It tastes like blood.My blood...My heart is bleeding.The pain overwhelming me.Without you there is no life.As darkness overwhelmes me with a hole in my heart.... |
by tastefull
AWW so sweet i can feel all your emotions. keep it up hun x |
Hey..i hope that you have that hole healed soon!..this is another very nice poem!....but in some ways it was sad :( nice write...and keep up the good work! |