It made all the sense. very transparent . i really enjoed going through each line. great job
all the best
just wishes

Lovely......beautiful.......good job!
effective one....5/5

luv,
Bharti

This life has taught me a very important lesson
In the line of duty and love
Duty wins and love stays unknown

what to say on this, seems u hv really been so close to the darker side of love but then many people have.....still i can bet they dont hv the art to put it on paper so beautifully as u did here. u r simply the best

Thousand deaths that I have died in my life
Once more I would wish to die
With the hope to reborn for your love
In your arms I will live my next life

as i commented earlier too, after reading ur poems and knowing ur wishes...i feel as if its my words and my desires u r talking abt..trust me..i can feel everything u r talking abt here and i just love ur poems.

all the best and take care

You know what..... that was something else! that poem was wonderful.. I could so relate to what you where saying... well done... 5/5

Wow, what a write, great job Michelle!!!

A wonderfully tragic masterpiece. definetely a work of art that uses every word to entrance the most thoughtful readers. you my friend, are one of the best.

I especially liked the rhymes that you chose!! Excellent overall!

Au contraire, Princess, it makes perfect sense. When you let your feelings out, you really let them out, huh? Beautiful! I love the 5th and 6th stanza and the last one is just so perfect. Excellent job on this!!

Can see how much this has touched readers before me. lovely, sad and yet beautifully written.

hope you are feeling okay.
love and peace
shobhana

He lives in the shadow of her hair
He breathes through the pores of her skin
It is for her that he curves all his paths
Giving all that he can from deep within

That was my favorite part! That was GREAT! Keep it up! Could you comment on my newest poem "Just A Breath"? It would be highly appreciated!

~Always4You~

I really like that, I can totally relate. I hope that is not true because I know how bad it hurts. Hope everything's all right!
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Great poem. i liked it. it was sad but so true. good job!

Great poem. i liked it. it was sad but so true. good job!

Great poem. i liked it. it was sad but so true. good job!

Great poem. i liked it. it was sad but so true. good job!

Great poem. i liked it. it was sad but so true. good job!

I really enjoyed this poem and as others have pointed out, I too can relate...

great job

Who among us has not learned the fool's lesson...
never, of course, to be repeated!
A fine delivery of a well-known dilemma....

p.s. I think,perhaps, you may have meant......
... to be reborn.....near the ending

Ah.....reincarnation......Ah...... karma......Ah......

X.xx
hey u left a comment on one of my poems..so i thought i would read some of urs...and i love it, i really do..reminds me of how i had felt once..amazing..xx.X