I really like this poem.. it gets everything needed to be expressed quickly w/o rambling on g' work

I love the poem it true and good, very very good

What a wonderful poem. It's a fantastic.

The lines might be a little bit too long though.

Suggestion (example)

Love is mysterious
It works in different ways
Love has its side affects
It comes on unexpected days

etc. etc.

Just a suggestion.

I love your work! I really do. You have some serious talent.

Well done once again!

Lotsaaaaaa love
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