This is a sad poem but i love it. this poem shows emotion that most ppl dream they could share. it shows heart ache pain and love. good job

That was excellent. I have always adored works that told stories...

Another thing is that I usually don't like poems that rhyme but, in your case, I didn't mind it because it was very cleverly written. You can always tell the difference between a poem that was just thrown together and one that was written with a lot of thought. Your poem most definately showed the latter.

Great job. :)

I am speechless yet moved.. you write like a pro

I really like this poem. It's very well written keep up the good work
5/5

take care!

This is probably one of the best poems I've read the past couple of weeks..
Can't think of anything that needs improvement..
Beautiful!

I loved this poem Ed..it was so touching. Your poems are full of emotion..which is so well expressed. Excellent.