by ~*~Yours-Truly~*~ Mar 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
This is a poem, |
This is a sad poem. And a great poem. I really like it. I enjoy reading your poems. |
Oh wow, it was good how you explained everything, gave the reader the sense that they are there and can see it all happening right before them, and the ending was probably the best way to end this poem! Keep up the good work 5/5 |