Say Goodbye!

by ShadowedPhoenix   Mar 21, 2006


A sea of emotions swim through my veins,
and at this very moment
I know life will never be the same!
For the echoing of the darkness
Are ringing bells of pain!
And the hatred should fade with time,
But it could choose to stay.
And then my sanity will be the torturing source of shame!

For death claimed another face,
That no other person can replace.
An angel destined to die,
How can it be?
What was he thinking?
To burden us with deceit!
The anger burns crystal and dark,
Death ripped my life apart!

Like crimson raindrops, tears christen my cheeks,
The desire for hope refuses to speak
and around me the truth begins to scream....
As they set her soul free,
So many around me share my grief
"Breathe now
You still can!"
But how.......
when such beauty was removed by man?

Fears echo inside and out,
Love is beautiful, this I start to doubt.
Love brought this pain,
Like a wilting flower robbed of rain,
There's nothing left of me
An empty torn soul which will never believe!!!

Fly now, let her soul free,
There's nothing but hatred to breathe.
A golden angel cannot shine,
If her heart is stolen and deceived!
What was taken cannot be replaced,

But say goodbye now...
Reality you must face!

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Laeka thanks for your comment and i think this poem confused a lot of people lol some maybe just wont admit it! It's hard to understand unless you know the situation, so for others reading this it might help you understand. It's about a friend of mine that was murdered last year along with her mother, father although her sister survived despite the 14 bullet wounds. Her mothers business partner shot them all. So this poem is about my friend and how i feel about her death. I also wrote about it in Senseless Murder!

    Thanks
    Mwah

  • 18 years ago

    by LastPromise

    Wow. I loved the message in this peom and it seems to have so much emotion into it. Its a poem I know I and probably many other people can relate to well done. 5*x-x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by tiffany

    You are a great writer, and it is clear that you are not a writer that just expresses what is on the surface but also what goes on inside. i love that and i really enjoyed reading your poem. If it flatters you to know i cried when i read it, but dont let that go to you head (jk). Great job.

    xox Tiffany

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Great flow to this hun 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jin

    I can feel all the emotions you have put into this piece. Excellent in everyway. 5/5 Well done. =)