Passion like fire...total emotion (witch i love) wonderful flow and deep words

I can feel all the emotions you have put into this piece. Excellent in everyway. 5/5 Well done. =)

Great flow to this hun 5/5

You are a great writer, and it is clear that you are not a writer that just expresses what is on the surface but also what goes on inside. i love that and i really enjoyed reading your poem. If it flatters you to know i cried when i read it, but dont let that go to you head (jk). Great job.

xox Tiffany

Wow. I loved the message in this peom and it seems to have so much emotion into it. Its a poem I know I and probably many other people can relate to well done. 5*x-x-x

Laeka thanks for your comment and i think this poem confused a lot of people lol some maybe just wont admit it! It's hard to understand unless you know the situation, so for others reading this it might help you understand. It's about a friend of mine that was murdered last year along with her mother, father although her sister survived despite the 14 bullet wounds. Her mothers business partner shot them all. So this poem is about my friend and how i feel about her death. I also wrote about it in Senseless Murder!

Thanks
Mwah