Hey there,
Well, Im also a member of the fishbowl club, so i decided to check ur stuff out. and this was ur first depressing piece of work *amazed* its so good, may be better than my dark stuff, haha. well good job, lol.
Monique

It's beautiful! :D This poem isn't HALF as depressing as some of mine! :D lol! I REALLY liked it!
PV

WOW Jon i really like this poem and you're right it does sound like an emo/screamo song.....I love it....*two big thumbs up*...Jocy

Hey fantastic first poem!!! I realy loved how u used bridges. awesome job hun :) keep it up *hugs*