Wow! brilliant poem! confusing but satisfying, it flowed beautifully!!!

well done!!!

xXx

WOW... That is awsome!! Very GOod!

Miranda

WOW... That is awsome!! Very GOod!

Miranda

That was one of the best poems I have ever read. It makes so much sense, but when you think about it...it doesn't. I love it!

God damn girl, best poem ever, I just loved the ending. This poem was worth waiting for, so amazing and very unique....Keep them coming hunn, I love all of your poems.

Always here for you, don't forget - Love Sabrina

Hey,
This is soo f@#$%^& good it amazing i am adding you to my favorits i really liked it your very talented keep it up

Wow.........its really good. like that was seriously my favorite poem on this website. i quit......maybe ill try and find a new hobby. ur addded to my favorites by the way if i find out how.

"I just feel I'm trapped in a world where I'm free
And I seem to be everyone but me
I'm lost but at the same time I'm found
I'm crowded but no ones around"

Such an amazing stanza. I literally choked on my water when i read it. It was so perfectly put together. Great job conveying your thoughts. Loved the poem.

I swear, i had no other option than to add u in my fav list after reading this one, may be that itself tell us my reacttion of ur poem.

all the best and take care
5/5

Wow! I havent read a poem that really meant something to me in a really long time. You're poem is awesome. keep on writing.

Can't say I agree with all your examples, but your over all idea is good and makes a great deal of sense. I wonder who we could asks such questions to? Who would answer in teh defense of this world? Nice poem.

-Tainted Mikochan

OMG i luv this poems...... i dont kno what it is but u deffinately got "IT".... keep it up never stop wrting
5/5

Such simplicity yet it says so much & stirs up an abundance of thoughts. you're very right && i wish , like you, i could find the world a little less selfish.

but. we just have to have faith in that.

Awsome! xxxxx 5/5 xxxxxxx

Man...that poem was awsome.Keep it up!
bye,
Kerstin

Man...that poem was awsome.Keep it up!
bye,
Kerstin

Wow...this is beatiful...every point you brought up made me think of how true it actually was...the second stanza was amazing."
And isn't it strange when we see something normal
And so acceptable when it's so odd
We won't believe each others truth
But we'll believe in such a thing as 'god" Wonderful work, you have a new fan lol 5/5