O wow!!! such talent in ur words!!! 5/5 for sure! wow...very unique. i pray every night about how greatful i am for having a loving father. if this poem relates to u...stay strong babe!!!
o BTW...from the commet u left me, dont get me wrong, i no u can fall in love at 9th grade...i was VeRy young when i truly fell in love(7th-8th) but thank u for the rate and comment.
u r a GrEaT writter!!!!!
jenie

OMG!!! how sad! how did you come up with this one???

Miss Linsey
I appreciate your comment and I didn't think my poem would be the best that you've read today or anyone else reads....I wrote it from the heart and it satisfied me...but thanks for your input....

Your poem is off tha chain. the ending cought me off gaurd. i thought he was beating his wife

Aw wow. That is really sad. You did a fantastic job on this though. I really liked it. Keep up the good work =] 5/5

luv natalie x-x

That was very sad and good but you have alot of errors you should read it over
5/5

This was a very sad poem, but I liked it!! 5/5

Hey linz
Well i fought it wo gud n i no it dint ryme bt i still liked it

That is a really good poem

Sixteen & a beast

Great poem-dymonbacc