Overused apology

by Sorefromreality   Mar 21, 2006


U say ur sorry
but it's already been said
you've made so many mistakes
ur conscience by now must be dead

tears shed from your eyes
don't have any meaning
i wont listen to your useless words
or any of your screaming

pointless actions
have been done
I'm not walking away again
this time I'll run

is this how it is
and how it alway will be
constantly getting kicked while I'm down
and u stepping all over me

ur words are just syllables
simple nothings from ur lips
and as you stumble across you lies
be careful not to trip

ur apologizes mean nothing
they have been overused
all the excuses you are throwing out
are anything but new

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  • 18 years ago

    by aaron 1 remo

    Yeah it was a good poem however the last rhyme didn't really work for me it might have worked better earlier on but imho i like there to be a whole rhyme to end the poem of but like i said (apart from a few 'ur's and 'i's) it was great
    Aaron (remo)

  • 18 years ago

    by Purple

    The rhyme of done and run seemed a little bit like you just couldn't think of anything, or didn't make the effort. I love the last two stanzas. Nothing else unless you want me to pick at your chouses like spelling U u or not capidizing some 'i's... Simple little editing stuff

    Besides that, like I said, it's pritty good.

  • 18 years ago

    by NiCoLe

    Wow i like it its really good i really enjoy reading ur poems there really great thanx for reading mine i try write more but i cant write much atm sorry

    love NiCoLe XOXO

  • 18 years ago

    by Tisha

    Sadly enough I know exactly where you are coming from with this poem.Awesome job of expressing your feelings.
    Tisha~

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