Sadly enough I know exactly where you are coming from with this poem.Awesome job of expressing your feelings.
Tisha~

Wow i like it its really good i really enjoy reading ur poems there really great thanx for reading mine i try write more but i cant write much atm sorry

love NiCoLe XOXO

The rhyme of done and run seemed a little bit like you just couldn't think of anything, or didn't make the effort. I love the last two stanzas. Nothing else unless you want me to pick at your chouses like spelling U u or not capidizing some 'i's... Simple little editing stuff

Besides that, like I said, it's pritty good.

Yeah it was a good poem however the last rhyme didn't really work for me it might have worked better earlier on but imho i like there to be a whole rhyme to end the poem of but like i said (apart from a few 'ur's and 'i's) it was great
Aaron (remo)