I love this! The way you intricately (sp?) wind both nature and human emotion is simply breathtaking.
Each line is a journey further into the forest of you heart. Beautifully written!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

That was really good please keep up the good work i enjoy reading your stuff thanks!!!!

Wonderful write Tom... Such deep emotion conveyed with wonderful use of words! Enjoyable read :)

Tom, the words are powerful and the emotion is deep in this write. A beautiful write.

Best regards,

Steve

You have amazing talent Tom. I am just drawn into your poems. Feeling so much akin to them. Wonderful. The words, the form. Everything about them. Your talent astounds me. 5/5

It was my pleasure to read you ...
Your words are going inside of heart ...

5/5 for u!!!

best regards ,
Mariana

This was simply beautiful.
The imagery you used was breathtaking and I thought the whole piece flowed very well.
You did a wonderful job on this, it was a pleasure to read.

Hey Tom This poem was lovely, your use of metaphors was excellent,the poem itself had good flow and was filled with emotion

Grant