I like this poem but maybe..just a suggestion..you should make it so it doesn't look like a paragraph cause then it's kinda hard to read but it's a good poem

Aww wow, this was really heartfelt and emotional. It was soo powerful, you spoke words right from your heart. Brilliant poem hun! Keep it up! 5/5

Thanks for your comment! xxx

Wow, you gotta hate teenage romances, they rarely last, and allways end bad, i feel for you, great expression of your emotions, :)