One word

This will sound stupid but what was the word?
I liked this one.
Improvments: Maybe using stanzas and some form of punctuation to really give it some umph!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Different writing style and a different sort of poem. Did I miss what the one word was ordid you not say it :)

You're writing style is diffrent but very good , your poems are so great i red 2 of them and both froze my mind :)
another deserved 5/5

~StefQ

This was good, very different then other poems I've read on freindship. I like the way you use words to try to make new meanings out of it, very original and I enjoyed reading this poem, although it was short, it had good emotion to it. great job on this poem.

You've got the right idea. Try cleaning up your flow. Keep it up